The day u said u don't love me anymore

by ECILA ice   Sep 18, 2006


My heart had been frozen
From thousand era before
Even today it was kept chilled
Left in coldness all alone
Your burning desires...
I can feel no more
Our passion and affection...
Are sealed inside a tomb
Placed 50 thousand feet underground

One pale soul
Left inside a chaotic battle
Stricken by an arrow of loneliness
Crimson liquid starts to lurk from inside
Clasping my last breath
Apocalypse were now embracing me
Murmuring that struggling are no use
For my only hope had left me
To tormented life that I never wanted

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bug1219

    I loved the wording in this one.. it was really great your a truely great poet.. keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    Omg i loved it, it was sad but nicely penned, i love free verse poems, amazing writing, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Oh my.....dear this was absolutely beautiful sad penned you potray here, i know and i understand what you've writing here...beautiful done....best wishes from west... bert ~

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Outstanding beautiful free verse

  • 18 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    Creative, I like it a lot. :)

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