Midnight Insecuritys

by craig   Mar 11, 2004


Sad eyes stinging in the dead of night
a heart in her head loses its fight
vulnerabilities rising to the fore
silence to her sweet implore

Blue eyes weeping in desperate vain
crying like the english rain
impassioned pleas to the dark
anxietys etching wounding marks

..do you love me
or just saying what I want to hear
..do you still want me
or just trying to allay my fears

..yes I love you?
but I say it because its true?
..of course I still want you?
so wipe your tears from view?

Sore eyes in a silent scream
unblinking through a sleepless dream
uncertainty blinding every thought
insidious doubts leave her distraught

Lifeless eyes stare through a void
endless desires feel destroyed
insecuritys deaden every hope
confidence failing on icy slopes

..do you need me
or just sparing me the pain
..do you still crave me
or are your words a feign

..yes I need you?
I will until I the day I die?
..of course I still crave you?
so soften your watery cries?

1...2....3
(all together now!)
Bite the dog
climb the tree
slap the pig
-look at me!-
prod the fig
jump the flea
rap the door
-LOOK at me!!-
kiss the frog
sip the tea
hit the git
-look at ME!!!-
lick the lamp
fax the key
kick the rat
-LOOK AT ME!-

Creased lips in a muffled cry
retching through a strangled sigh
fears intoning cold refrains
aspirations chocked and slain

Lonely lips voice eclectic distress
latent lips covet without success
fretful vexations hush all sound...
dropping through a drifting cloud...

..do you cherish me
or just playing callous games
..do you still adore me
or have you quenched those flames

..yes I cherish you?
with every beat of my heart?
..of course I still adore you?
and I have right from the start?

1...2....3
(one more time!)
Stun the cat
sting the bee
cup the clap
-LOOK at me!-
roll the fag!
drain the sea
suck the soap
-look at ME!-
eat the ant
fly the `V`eee
spark the broke
-LOOK at ME!!-
scoob the doo
print the tee ;)
crack the egg
-LOOK-AT-ME!!!-
twig the fish
-down on knee-
tick the tock
-NOTICE ME!-
(Goo goo ga joob!)

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  • 19 years ago

    by Michelle

    STILL love this poem honey!!! :)xxx

  • 20 years ago

    by Michelle

    you're brilliant babyxxx

  • 20 years ago

    by paddy

    WOW
    long time sorry i havent comment on your new stuff been so busy i'll be here all night reading and commenting
    ok ok i'll get on with it lol
    this poem is filled with passion
    whilst reading this i started to get a feeling in the pit of my stomach i carnt explain it's also awoken feelings i had tried to bury.
    this is a fantastic pieace which never serprises me
    i don't know where ever to love it or hate it
    but it's certainly a amazeing piece
    5 out of 5 yet again
    all my love
    lorns
    xxx

  • 20 years ago

    by lawrence

    hi Craig! this one really got me all tangled up inside! i do not know whether to laugh or to cry!?!? did not get it the first time round, but gradually it daunt on me the range of emotions it expresses... the silent insecurities - "muffled cry", "strangled sigh", "hush all sound", "drifting cloud", "pleas to the dark"... yet the crying out for attention! - "1...2...3..."!!! your poems, it just gets more complex doesn't it??? FIVE my friend!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Michelle

    well ok...let's see..firstly my favorite lines were roll the fag and drain the sea..umm..you know why.hah..second you hit the git last night, most likely! and I have to get up soon(can it still be get up if you haven't been down??) to print the tee ;)...oh and yes..go go ga goob..or whatever(ku ku cha choo sounds ok tho doesn't it??) Anyway.......I loved it, it's fantastic..not really more I can say about it because it was brilliant..would have to read you back the entire thing..and I guess you already know it! Take care..Luv..Michelle