by blueknight
Wow this is a great poem , you have a talent and the rhytm was great and i love the message great piece |
by Misstress
Very original poem here... |
by Carrotgirl
I love, love, love your words. (loads favourites). I can't discribe the pleasure I felt without getting banned off the site lol |
by Sweet lig
Yeah job well done...its great 5/5 |
by Esther
Don't quite grasp what its explaining! but thought it was worth a 5 anyway! |
This really has an interesting sound. i had to read it outloud a few times to actually get the flow right. great work.. keep it up for sure. |
Wow. I feel the same as Esther. Lol. I have no idea about what it's explaining. In the beginning, it sounded like you were talking about sniffing drugs, or something, and then you kind of lost me at the 'pull snap, pull snap' part lol. But I loved it anyways. =P Great flow, and words were wonderfully placed. Great piece! =) 5/5 xoxo |
by Audrey
Theres two people in the piece and it doesnt have anything to do with drugs. |
by Audrey
"pull and snap, pull and snap |
by Robie Lincer
Thats a nice poem! it was well written keep it up! |