Realistic Fantasy

by Freddie   Sep 18, 2006



Read between the lines.

You render me helpless,
unable to move,
Your words bitter in tasting,
Yet sound oh so smooth,

With a piercing stare of a thousand suns,
You leak memories of the past,
Whispering idealisms,
Of a feeling not built to last,

Your tough, strong, built exterior,
in itself, entangles lies,
with a spotlight, slowly breaking down,
hidden deep within your eyes,

A twisted smile,
masks all known as true,
your hiding behind sweet porcelain,
hiding away from...you,

Your laugh seems to have vanished,
I can't hear its delicate sound,
enlaced into the eves of history,
And yet its presence, so profound,

Your short trimmed hair,
So delicately gelled back,
like an army of soldiers,
or kangaroos in the outback,

And when you close your eyes,
you drift off into fantasy,
Which is really reality,
hidden in your own morality.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Donavin

    That was a good poem but then again im dumb so i didnt understand it all just cuz of that dosnt mean its bad to me it just im dumb so yeah... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Your right, that is very well written. It tells a deep story. My favorite two lines are:

    Your words bitter in tasting,
    Yet sound oh so smooth.

    Perfectly written. =] 5/5