Wow. This poem is GREAT. The way you wrote it is very good, easy to follow and get into the character's mind- whether real or fictitous.

I hope to read more by you :)

~Scarlett

This poem is great, and I really mean that. I also like your quotes. Keep up the good work, Joel!

Its flowed really well and i can relate alot to this poem 5/5 :)