I love your poem! it is breathtaking! I love the rhyme scheme that you put it in. Keep up the great work. 5/5 from me.
Peace.

Aww what a beautifully, well written poem.. the rhythm and flow was great.. well done 5/5 xx

I liked the emotion in this one. The flow and heart were very good as well. Nice work.

I liked this poem! I thought it was very well-written. My favourite lines were:

"The only one i've looked forward for;
A soul reminder in a whithered core."

The words you used were great! Great job!
5/5