Short and sweet, good job!

Nicely done. Direct. Pointed. Emotional. I love it. I hope all is well and it is nothing rest won't solve.

Nicely done, well expressed Mary, kudos, great job!!!

Very expressive and emotional... Great write, with great rhymes. I do hope that everything is okay, keep writing... Cast those demons away!

I do believe that when one crys, it helps us push through just a little, maybe a lot...Its ok to cry about whatever hard time you go through. I'm glad you realize that by the end of this poem! I loved it...short, simple, (Bill took my other word) and very direct!
Wonderfully done as usual Cudds!
Chelsey

Very good description of that feeling
very clear,well written
keep it up

The despair of the world. The struggle of life. The will to survive. Great message in this poem Excellent write.