Some great words in ther..

"She sits in her room and cries
At times wishing she'd die.
Inside she is broken, a swirling, catastrophic mess of emotion."

i loved this part of the poem the best..keep it up

october xx

Its a very great write! Well done!
If its not too much if you could please check out the two powms
Til the End
Confusion and rate them it would mean a lot!
5/5
God Bless,
Taylor