6am

by Sinister Soire   Sep 18, 2006


You breath me in first thing of every day
but you always question this fact
Technically you take a gasp of fresh air,
once in a while,
But none the less, you inhale me
I burn inside you
with that pain that is so good
I am detrimental to your health

why do you encourage such pain
invoke such suffering
induce these feelings of remorse
for nothing sinned

Last thing every night, you breath me in
But you always question this fact
technically there is a moment of solace
as the sun dips beyond the horizon
where there is no one but you with yourself
none the less you inhale me
and I devour myself over you
you are detrimental to my health

why do you encourage such pain
invoke such suffering
induce these feelings of remorse
for nothing sinned

Because at 6 am in the silence of the world
it feels good to be...
to be what is the question
rather the riddle
of life eternal
without true
sin

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  • 18 years ago

    by Haven

    This poem have a very uniqe style and I love it!!!!!! 5/5 you can check out mine if you please

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This poem is so touchy and very well written, great job I really enjoyed reading this poem that dont deserve anything less than a 5/5. great job again.
    and if you could check out my poem
    the luckiest guy 2,tnx

  • 18 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    I like your word choice and structure of this poem a lot. It's dark, not a subject covered very often on this site, and with such talent. I enjoyed your poem, looking forward to reading more of your work!

    Could you please r/r/c "Shadows of your Heart" Thanks! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    You've got original style. I liked your choice of words and imagery. The last stanza was the best because of the deepness in the words. However, I think you can work on the flow a bit more and clarify the title. Keep it up

    Please r/r/c Under the Moonlight

  • 18 years ago

    by Audrey

    You have an original way of writing. It was both refreshing and (do to the subject material) suffocating.

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