Why do you encourage such pain
invoke such suffering
induce these feelings of remorse
for nothing sinned

^^I loved that, it produced such great emotion and depth. You have talent, my friend. Good work.. I hope to read more. I will add you to my favorites.

You have an original way of writing. It was both refreshing and (do to the subject material) suffocating.

You've got original style. I liked your choice of words and imagery. The last stanza was the best because of the deepness in the words. However, I think you can work on the flow a bit more and clarify the title. Keep it up

Please r/r/c Under the Moonlight

I like your word choice and structure of this poem a lot. It's dark, not a subject covered very often on this site, and with such talent. I enjoyed your poem, looking forward to reading more of your work!

Could you please r/r/c "Shadows of your Heart" Thanks! :)

This poem is so touchy and very well written, great job I really enjoyed reading this poem that dont deserve anything less than a 5/5. great job again.
and if you could check out my poem
the luckiest guy 2,tnx

This poem have a very uniqe style and I love it!!!!!! 5/5 you can check out mine if you please