Comments : Paint it Black

  • 18 years ago

    by VanityIllusions2

    Your poems have real meaning and it makes people understand where your coming from! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by broken reflection

    ^agree your poems are great to read... hang on every word... 5/5 keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by John (Mr. Whuppy)

    HELP I hope your not a demon allthough coming from Wales you could well be lol
    terrific flow rhyme and rhythm
    just how It should be
    Well done
    Love this part

    Her heart once weeped with inhuman pain
    An immortal toucher, driven insane

    A definite 5/5
    John

  • 18 years ago

    by Watchmeburn

    Good poem, I really liked reading it, and thanks for your comment.

  • 18 years ago

    by sacred 4 life

    HELL YEAH this ones phucking cool i like it its proble one of my favriots this one and confessens of the damned

  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    This is a good poem nice job thanks for your comment on "Recipe for insanity"

  • 14 years ago

    by Gness

    This is a sweet dark write it could have been a song too. But the attention taker is the descriptive and shadowy motion as the poem flows. "Demonic creature you became to be" fav