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  • 18 years ago

    by Bitt3rSw33t

    Damn! very well organized...very well written...reminded me of my ex & our good ol' days LoL Your poem feels real! Great job...anyone who has experienced such passionate love with another will definately connect and love this poem...

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    I love it..u bring out ur emotions very well..u bring everything to lifef in ur writing..keep up the good work

    5/5

    Em

  • 18 years ago

    by kida

    Love it love it love it

  • 18 years ago

    by bladeXslides

    That makes me all excited about sex.
    i never experienced it. but, i would like to...

  • 18 years ago

    by Brooke Amity

    I love this poem!
    i appreciate a real 'erotic' poem where smut is not needed.
    this poem is beautiful.
    ..xx

  • 18 years ago

    by christine

    I love it. It sounds like perfection. Your phantasm is 6 stars.