by Gillian
Wow I really love the way you write.. something about if just sucks you in and give you a picture of how is feels.. thanks |
by Brisa
Great poem!! damn. such a sad story but it was great |
by Bitt3rSw33t
When you described her actual suicide, it was described very well, with lots of emotion, but I felt as though you lost the core of the poem towards the end...but overall your poem had emotion... |
Really great. very touching. so sad but so amazing. keep up the good work. |
by Baybeeh
For some reason ur poem really touched me i got shivers thanks for the idea though luv ya |
by Baybeeh
For some reason ur poem really touched me i got shivers thanks for the idea though luv ya |
by sara
This is really sad but think of the bright side you have a mom lol 5/5 keep it up |
Well These are the types of poems i usually read... This one is one of the best... you are so talented.. i love your way of writeing.. never let anyone stand in your way of writeing.. keep giving me something to read something to look forward to... |