This was supposed to be humorous right?

Aww..that's really sweet that you made a poem for your best friend:)
I did like it, its just the "dog poo and dog meat" part kind of lowered it in quality, but its fine, its your poem:)
Hmm..the flow was good and i hope you guys stay friends forever..you sound like really good friends:)

That is very well written and great emotions showed, great job 5/5

This is nicely written. I liked the emotion, depth, and heart you put to it. Nice work, truly.

Awwwww...thts sooo sweet!! i liked it..a 5/5 for me

I agree with all the other comments regarding dog poo/meat but i also would like to tell u that in the end its your feelings and whatever comes right from heart is what counts, i really liked the strength of ur relation...very +ive indeed

all the best and take care

I knew i shud of commented early lol ppl bet me to it :( but wot can i say, am a procrastinator :p

wen i first read tht poem i started crying awwww bless me! omg esther ya tottaly rock!!!! luv ya!

Ah this is so sweet..i love writing poems for my friends. this made me smile...it was kinda funny
good job

I can relate to this with my bf it is really cool xxx alex xxx

The intentions of the poem are great, I'm glad that you feel this way about your best friend. But, The poem needs alot of work. The flow and rhyme scheme are really off. "My best-est friend ever is girl" This line doesn't work... The grammer doesn't make any sense-- I would suggest re-writing it. The use of the words: dog poo and dog meat makes the poem sound childish.

Haha, this made me giggle at times.
I thought this was really sweet.

Beautiful. I got a laugh outa that. And I totally see your point. It's good to have such a good friend.

5/5.

This is very cute, and funny! nicely written!

Very well written peice filled with emotions..kp up the good job!...cute write!
xxPoojaxx

Oh how sweet. She's very lucky to be your best friend XD

This poem was meant to make a point, and I agree dog meat and dog poo, is a bit childish but I couldn't think of anything better. It was meant to be good humoured but also have a point to it.