Another broken promise

by *Black Rose*   Sep 18, 2006


You broke your promise
you shredded it apart
those few little words you told me
you broke them and wont regret
i sit here now ready to break down
fall into tears
and cry out loud
when you said ii
i thought you meant it
what a joke that was
it\'s hard to believe it
get a grip of what happened
why
why did you do it?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley Bird

    This is really good! I love the way you didnt have to rhyme to make a great poem!! Keep writing!!
    Hayley

  • 18 years ago

    by Bitt3rSw33t

    I really like your poem...wording, emotions were great...