by Audrey Sep 18, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
His face is pulled and contorted at odd angles |
by Robie Lincer
"flooded with bottled emotion and loss of pride" |
It's a good poem but it reads more like a story. Some suggestions: Don't always tell us what we should see. Show us instead of that. |
by donna
A very enjoyable read in a sad way.. beautifully written.. well done 5/5 xx |