by Edward Weiss Sep 18, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
In the pine tree |
by Leslie
Ooo i like this. i've read some haikus in my time and this one is good. bravo, so many people muddle haikus with long words and leave them feeling unfinished but this one stands strong and alone. dont change it at all, i've got my perfect little image and its unmistakeable and wonderful |
by Ellie
All three were short, cute, and sweet. Perhaps something different sometime? :-P Good job. |