Hi sweet heart, thanks for commenting on my poem. I know you're a harsh critic towards yourself, but you should learn that everyone has different styles and yours is perfect the way it is. I really liked this by the way, it rang true for me from the start. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading your new stuff. Shinae xxx

Hi sweet heart, thanks for commenting on my poem. I know you're a harsh critic towards yourself, but you should learn that everyone has different styles and yours is perfect the way it is. I really liked this by the way, it rang true for me from the start. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading your new stuff. Shinae xxx