Bleeding Angel

by CourtneyLouxxx   Sep 19, 2006


Look at the angel
The one on the floor
She bleeding because of you
She could have done more

She seeks out some shelter
From this world that she hates
She prowls in the darkness
Through the cemetery gates

She looks round the headstones
reading the names
she finds her lost lover
the one that she blames

Through the thickness of the fog
Her lost lover arises
unknown to her senses
a man of many disguises

out of the ashes
the truth will rise
the reason he broke her heart
the many tears she cries

She searches for her lost youth
As she hears the wind sing
'Beautiful as the starlight you shall be,
it's time for your final fling'

She knows what shes always wanted
but she was never in its reach
she hides in her fantasy
so Satan can't reach her soul to bleach

bleach it black and take it back
to the depths of hell
the place she calls home
where her lonely thoughts dwell

her nightmare will soon end
when shes accepted by the devil
if shes worthy of his honor,
can she live upon his level?

As the darkness consumes her
She whispers in the air
'take me from here,
so him i can scare'

as the wind lifts her up
out from Satan's hand
she bends her knees
and pray she worthy to stand

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  • 18 years ago

    by disenchanted

    Just way you write it the lil stories and the words you use its so dark and depressing. a beautiful write. you really do have a talent for dark...

    Amz

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Wow thats excellent courtney u got a good talent for dark poetry keep it comin xox sam

  • 18 years ago

    by Kellie

    I love this poem yoo are a really talented writer!
    xXxkelliexXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    This is the stanza I focused on.......

    "as the wind lifts her up
    out from Satan's hand
    she bends her knees
    and pray she worthy to stand"
    ......................................I suggest:
    and prays she is worthy to stand.........
    .............................................................
    Strive on, Sweetheart.....there is So much more...

  • 18 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem was amazing! Great job it had an excellent flow! 5/5 (Your a relli good writter)