Thnx for ur comments....this is also a nice poem...its touching too..the first n last standza are really nice...5/5

This poem was amazing! Great job it had an excellent flow! 5/5 (Your a relli good writter)

This is the stanza I focused on.......

"as the wind lifts her up
out from Satan's hand
she bends her knees
and pray she worthy to stand"
......................................I suggest:
and prays she is worthy to stand.........
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Strive on, Sweetheart.....there is So much more...

I love this poem yoo are a really talented writer!
xXxkelliexXx

Wow thats excellent courtney u got a good talent for dark poetry keep it comin xox sam

Just way you write it the lil stories and the words you use its so dark and depressing. a beautiful write. you really do have a talent for dark...

Amz