by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX Sep 19, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Mirror mirror on the wall who's the craziest of them all? Is it the memory that cant come clean or is it my future you've for seen.As i stare at the bottle wanting to stay sober all i think is it might soon be over.So take the knife push it deep look at my face the pain runs deep. |
This is probably one of the deepest poems i have ever read. The emotion spills out of it and the pain in the poem just pours out like a waterfall |
I like it alot, it shows passion and emotion. but i hope this isnt how you actually feel in real life because alot of your poems are like it. if its just poems then i understand. but in real life no person deserves to live that way. no matter what they have done or what was done to them. |
by Goth
Very emotional !!! ) nice job!5/5 |
You're very creative with your writing, I like it. The emotion and heart were amazing. Nice work, truly. |
by Darien
"For seen" is actually spelled "foreseen" |