Mirror mirror

by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX   Sep 19, 2006


Mirror mirror on the wall who's the craziest of them all? Is it the memory that cant come clean or is it my future you've for seen.As i stare at the bottle wanting to stay sober all i think is it might soon be over.So take the knife push it deep look at my face the pain runs deep.

I lay in my bed thinking of him knowing soon i will be dead in my deep slumber i wont remember all the hurt i can feel, so remember my rhyme one last time, mirror mirror on the wall who's the coldest of them all take my hand feel the pain watch the blood run through my veins.I close my eyes and say a prayer cause this is the last time cause soon i will be there.you may find life unfair but there are many who never cared many hearts are shallow .

But in end the we will learn to forgive.I never wanted this life i didn't ask for it so you cant call me selfish for giving up cause i never was given the chance to survive.Mirror mirror on the wall who was the lowest of them all was it the girl who couldn't feel even tho she smiled every day she was just the devils prey.

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  • 15 years ago

    by XxMoonLightxX

    This is probably one of the deepest poems i have ever read. The emotion spills out of it and the pain in the poem just pours out like a waterfall
    You are a true amazing writer and i wish you would keep writing because you are really really good!

  • 17 years ago

    by xxdOnTbReAkMyHeArtxx

    I like it alot, it shows passion and emotion. but i hope this isnt how you actually feel in real life because alot of your poems are like it. if its just poems then i understand. but in real life no person deserves to live that way. no matter what they have done or what was done to them.

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth

    Very emotional !!! ) nice job!5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    You're very creative with your writing, I like it. The emotion and heart were amazing. Nice work, truly.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    "For seen" is actually spelled "foreseen"
    You also rhymed deep with deep. Well, ok to be honest, the poetry style of this was not great, but the contents of the poem were. You had good ideas, and good imagery, but you just didn't write them out right. Still, just keep trying.

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