Healing

by Audrey   Sep 19, 2006


When punishment is over
and ive paid off all my dues
when my bones grow frail
and my body whithers
i'll see you healed
once more we'll both be whole

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Nicely done.. I liked it! Good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Lovely written!
    short nice!
    straight to the point!
    Flow was good!
    Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    This poem sees more like a collection of random thoughts not strung together properly to form a poem. It does lack a solid center where every line makes sense. Especially your final lines.

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    I thought it was good. The flow was a bit off, and it could've been expressed more. I thought this could've been more of a quote than a poem. Just my point of view. =) 4/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Marcus

    Not bad but could be better I dont reall know the whole concept of this poem

Read All Comments (8)

More Poems By Audrey