Im Sorry

by David   Sep 19, 2006


I tell you that Im sorry
for being cold, and blind, and weak
i just have to say that I am sorry

to you I was cold,
like a winters day
and I did what I was told
to go far away

to you I was blind
i could not see
your perfect mind
your inner beauty

to you I was weak
i was not strong
so don't speak now
i was in the wrong

i need to tell you
for my own sake
that I still love you
it was my mistake

i played around with love
like it was a game
like I was above
but now Im in pain
of loosing you
i'm dying now
so what do I do
because I cant stop
crying,
over loosing you

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  • 17 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Another touching poem 5/5 XD

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Awhh this poem is sad=[ but i really liked it. good job writing it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    5/5 I love this poem heaps! I can totally relate to it! it's wonderful, thank you for commenting on my poems! it means a lot! anyways keep up your excellent poems, love em ;)
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Your amazing! at writting they way you describ it. and the wording you use. its fantastic! you did a great job! the rhyming was amazing :] great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow this is really short but it is to the point and really good!