Very touching.

Very sweet

Nice

Nicer

Soo much emotion there, very well writen i loved it 99/5

A brillitant piece, straight from the heart :)) loved it :))

A very touching poem, I really like how you took the time to make it rhyme, makes it so much better in my opinion. Maybe I'm just a sucker for rhyming though. Anyway, it was really good, I feel I can relate.

Aww that was sad. haha...sadly...i know how u feel. good poem. ;)

That's really sad, but it's amazing!!! ur a really good writer, this brought me to tears... :'-( great job!

*Shawte*

I would love for this poem to be about me, from my David, lol. This is a really honest sounding poem, like you really mean it. Good flow, and use of emotions. =] 5/5

Tammie

Wow finally a guy that has feelings your cool in my book pal and good poerty its very touching

Very sweet and touching poem..i love it. great job!!! 5/5

This poem is such a great poem to tell someone that you're sorry. everything is just so well put together. 5/5

Another great poem! I love these lines:

"i played around with love
like it was a game"

Great metaphors! =)
5/5

This poem is sweet. and nice and evyerthing. its just plain amazing!

I loved the emotion. It was also sweet. Great poem. I really liked the last part. I don't know why...I just do!! 5/5

~Shae (Thanks for the comments)

Not bad dude. Is it supposed to be a song?

Awww this was adorable nice write!

Wow this is really short but it is to the point and really good!

Your amazing! at writting they way you describ it. and the wording you use. its fantastic! you did a great job! the rhyming was amazing :] great job!