The Darkness Around Me

by Vic   Sep 19, 2006


Circles I'm running
Alone in the dark.
Gone mad I must have;
Raving and stark.

Looking and searching
In this endless abyss.
Reason is lost to me,
Disappeared in a wisp.

Climbing a staircase,
White among black.
But for every step forward
I take two steps back.

Every doorway I enter,
I find I have wronged.
My time in the darkness
Has again been prolonged.

This puzzle my master,
Difficulty knows no match.
Over the years
More bonds are attached.

Weighted by burdens
No help in the struggle.
Efforts to freedom futile,
Actions quickly humbled.

Shouting for a savior,
Echoes only reply.
I'm left helpless, alone,
World oblivious to my cries.

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  • 17 years ago

    by KelseyinWonderland

    An amazing poem. The words and stanzas fit together very nicely. Keep up the great work!

    ~K3!$3Y~

  • 18 years ago

    by eternalxxpromise

    Yea, i agree with the people commenting above me.
    emo feeling in this poem.
    and yeah, awesome stanzas. ;)stay strong........:)
    -steph

  • 18 years ago

    by amanda

    Omg, you're so emo. i love this!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fay

    Woooow, this poem is great, I loved the way it flowed; especially the last stanza good ending ;).
    Keep it up!