Nice and possitive, good message
very well done
keep it up :)

Great work, keep it up
love kat

Another great poem by you, another 5/5 from me.

Kool poem,

october xx

Absolutely beautiful penned, flowed with beautiful message......well inspiring! .... bert ~

Interesting read.
I like how you describe life little by little.
Good job
5/5

God Bless!

Wow, thats my kind of poem. strong, deep and positive. it flowed okay, rhyming wasnt great but the message was perfect. well done

THAT IS REALLY TRUE LIFE IS SO DIFFICULT! the message of this poem is nice it express something about life but very interesting well its great5/5

That was a good poem..i liked the flow and rhyming...it was a good topic and a strong meaning. A nice easy read.Fantastic job:)

Nice peice, strong message well conveyed.

I really lilke the last stanza, despite it's longer lines it still seemed to maintain flow fairly well and really finished the peice off well