V.o.m.i.t.

This was so sad.. I can't personally relate to this, but I have friends who can. It's sad to think that someone thinks they have to throw up their food just to get thinner. Everyone is beautiful in their own way. I know they don't think that which makes this so sad. Amazing poem! I really liked it. It expressed what some people have to go through just to get thinner.

Keep writing!
Cayce

Everyone is beautiful. everyone. this tells of a story that i can see clearly in my mind.

i will give it a 5 like everyone else!

david

I like the idea of this poem.. but there wasnt much of a flow and some rhymes seemed forced.. try reading it out loud.. then maybe you'll notice the flow problems

Good poem, really had a lot of emotion, flowed beautifully. great job 5/5

I really like this one! nice work, the rhyming is awsome and he flow is almost perfect!
great work!
Steph