That poem was very well written! Great job!

That was a great poem for such a horrible act. i love how u brought it all together. very nice flow. well done. 5/5

Very powerful, especially the last line. Great word choice and I like how you talk about bulimia without totally trashing it or making sound like its awesome. Many people forget that those with this problem are ashamed, and want to get better but don't know how. Great Job! XXXXX
JL

Wow...really good.. 5/5!

ps.. plz read my poem: please hold me tight. maybe you can relate?

I really like this one! nice work, the rhyming is awsome and he flow is almost perfect!
great work!
Steph

Good poem, really had a lot of emotion, flowed beautifully. great job 5/5

I like the idea of this poem.. but there wasnt much of a flow and some rhymes seemed forced.. try reading it out loud.. then maybe you'll notice the flow problems

Everyone is beautiful. everyone. this tells of a story that i can see clearly in my mind.

i will give it a 5 like everyone else!

david

This was so sad.. I can't personally relate to this, but I have friends who can. It's sad to think that someone thinks they have to throw up their food just to get thinner. Everyone is beautiful in their own way. I know they don't think that which makes this so sad. Amazing poem! I really liked it. It expressed what some people have to go through just to get thinner.

Keep writing!
Cayce