Interesting story,
You know how to put your emotions unto writing..
Good work!

Beautiful poem....i love the words.....hope you have more coming

Very nice. I love how there is a story behind it, and "real life" sort of feeling. Something that could happen and/or has happened to everyone.

-Luna

Nice job...rhyme scheme was a little off, but overall i really enjoyed this poem. your a fav. of mine! Jpoet*

Beautifully written darl very well d0ne. keep it up xx

Im totally speechless! What a nice poem to read... soothing...comforting... touching in a way one can never forget it's existence.Great job!

I liked it nice flow...alot of emotion put into it great job

Wow...amazing. 5/5

A very passinate love poem that anyone in love can relate to

Beautiful poem, very romantic, sounds like it wasworth waiting for!

I LOVE this poem.
everyone has felt this way and you put into words so perfectly.
Thank you!
..xx

Beautiful...just beautiful...keep it up. I could see it clearly happening in my head and it was so calming. I loved it.

This really captures the moment, in the most easiest way. It's great! :]

This poem was really really beautiful, it shows the love you share with someone, it shows the confusing of feelings, and it was absolutely awesome!

Awesome poem

Oh my god i love your poem its amazing..its just soo touching in everyway its unbelievable

Very beautiful poem:)...keep up the good work your doing great!!5/5

Amazing. I felt the very same way when i first fell in love. it is a beautiful thing. We all pray these things last...and hopefully they all will.

So sweet and really petty too 5/5

Wow. . .that is a nice poem. . .I love it. . .Keep up the work. . .I LOVE THIS