Comments : I pray this will last.

  • 18 years ago

    by susan

    Awww...SWEET!! Great Poem!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Awww wonderful poem. I feel like I could picture in my head the perfect Kodak moment. Excellent job. Funny how things turn out doesn't it? It just shows, never give up hope. I wish you the best of luck.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Wooow thats so good! i loved the whole poem! cant choose which part was my fav lol! its amazing you got the talent! awsome\
    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Oh! yay, this is so perfect in the eyes!
    so full of emotions and very heartfelt! very breathtaking aswell!

    I love your poems and how they print a smile to the face =)
    I wasn't in a good mood till I read this poem..oh gosh fantastically written!
    I totally love it

    thanks for the inspiration!
    Keep It Up
    Luv
    NemO x0x0x0x0x0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww.. I love this poem. It's very sweet, It was very beautifully written and it flowed very well. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by endless tears

    Uh well um this shure was a good poem..
    i think it was sweet.
    5/5
    plz read and commit mine as ive done for you..

  • 18 years ago

    by awww

    BEAUTIFUL! loved it sooo much... can't believe i just read it now... hehe... its a wonderful poem... the flow and rhyme were great... excellent write! keep it up!

    ~angel~

  • 18 years ago

    by Zach Buenger

    I LOVED THIS! a very inspirational write... thanks for your comment

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    A very beautiful poem. I loved reading it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristen

    Wow, perfect flow, perfect rhyme....PERFECT!

  • 18 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    My favorite part was
    "I came so close to telling you
    But butterflies were my defeat
    So I'll hold off on this moment
    And let my heart just lead."
    I think we can all relate to that =]
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Yu Lee

    I love this poem!! It very beautiful. ^-^

  • 17 years ago

    by the simple girl

    One Word: Beautiful.

    ---Ashley

  • 17 years ago

    by Yu Lee

    I love this poem ^-^

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    Well done

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Now i know why everyone has voted on this poem, it is trully excellent, it was full of love and affection, the words spoke true love.

    the flow was outstanding, and the ending was superb, well done.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by blackheartslove

    I have no words for the beauty of this poem. it is simply.......... amazing! i loved reading it!

  • 12 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Once again you have taken a moment in my life and caputered it in a poem, and done it so well!
    i really love your style of poetry and your obvious talent for it.

    yet another amazing read. 5*