Once Upon A Time

by Darien   Sep 19, 2006


Once Upon A Time

I've got a few good words for you
With no intentions of selling them
Beg for forgiveness like you want it
Ask for second chances like you need it.

Wrong again but you can pretend
Like everyone is still listening
Don't believe me but I'm right
When I say this isn't easy

Goodbye to you my friend
Friday nights will never be the same
An empty space on my couch
As it breathes for the first time

Phone calls come once a blue moon
I've forgotten the sound of songs
What does the outside hold for me?
And when will you ever come home?

I'll forgive, if you forget.
When I said "I love you"
Once upon a time
We made mistakes.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this, I thought it was sweet yet sad.
    The flow threw me at times, but apart from that I think you did a good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    Very nice poem, good flow, good vocab, you're a good writer. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem. With good rhythm and word choice.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    Wow... very sad, but i like what your saying in this poem. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    "As it breathes for the first time"
    Now this, I like. You're definetely going on my favourites list, I love your work. 5 from me, well done! ^.^