by Darien Sep 19, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Once Upon A Time |
by Jenni Marie
I liked this, I thought it was sweet yet sad. |
by Mousie
Very nice poem, good flow, good vocab, you're a good writer. 5/5 |
by Brittany C
Very good poem. With good rhythm and word choice.5/5 |
by Carmen
Wow... very sad, but i like what your saying in this poem. 5/5 |
by SCARECROW
"As it breathes for the first time" |