I think this was really good... I like the line, "I stood so tall yet wept inside." Great job, 5/5
~Jules

Wow hun that was amazing. It was so sad and I can really relate to it...I loved it. It was so unique and I have actually started writing a poem with a similar theme...I doubt it'll turn out as good as yours but we'll see. Great job, I hope everything is okay.
5.5 for sure
Breanna

Thsi is rele good, it may be short, but its amazing! thank you for the comment xxx i'll check back! bye

Thanks!!! i like yours too, short yet really good

"I stood so tall yet wept inside"

This is really good, keep up the good work

I can totally relate to this poem. i have tons like it but i dont think any are worthy of being on my page .. so they stay in my diaries but you captured the whole thing in so few words ..its just relly good

Thanx 4 the comment
i really loved this poem!!!

This poem is wonderful! i love it. you really put your heart into it. thank you for the comment on one of my poems. it really means alot.

keep writing

Your the only one who made a comment on any of my stuff so i had to check yours out AND I LOVED IT a lot of these poems are flucking GOOD your very talented and i give you two thumbs up girly girl i can't wait to read more!

Wow, This was really good, Short- but in those few words you really said alot. Thank you for the comment. =)
You're an amazing writer.
I'm adding you to my favs so I can read your poem ALL THE TIME!!!! And of course check for updates. I'm giving you a 5!

Geez, Thank's for the comment, I seriously liked this poem- from begining to end. It's one of those poems that keeps you reading- and makes you incapable of stopping. 5*

-Rora

This was really goooood!! I got goosebumps! heheh well thanks for the coment. Your a good writer.

Hunny this is a very good poem,yet when i read your poems they tear my heart . i can feel your pain and it makes me sad. i like happyness!!
in which i will forever dwell!

*claps*
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*claps AND cheers*
It flowed so well, and held such meaning, it would have been wrong to not have read it three times.
And yeah, yeah I did read it three times.

Wonderful poem... really captured emotion and you used the best adjectives to fit it... I loved it 5/5!

I love your poem. It is amazing, I agree with Dailin Coldfire! It is really deep and obviously comes from the heart. I love it
Much Love,
~*Dreaming Of Your Face*~

Good poem, i know how that is too..

That was very pretty and thnxz for the poem comment

I liked this one +