You can tell you really loved him.You were willing to put up with everything and all you asked from him was to grow up.Excellent poem.I liked it.I gave you a 5!

Your poem reminds me of a relationship one of my friends used to be in...They dated for four years and he was heavily into drugs...and although he loved her and was "good" to her...she still felt alone...Sorry you had to go through something like that...it's difficult to get yourself together and come to a conclusion...And your poem, of course was wonderful...