Comments : The day that never ended.

  • 18 years ago

    by GothicPrincess

    Omg....im so sry that happened to u...i know how it feels to be raped by someone u love...im here if u need to talk!!

  • 18 years ago

    by me

    Great job on da poem .....very intense and also really sad i cant really relate but dats just sad and cant imagine why ppl do dis wen all dey do is hurt..i give u a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    I am so sorry. I can't believe that @$$hole did that to you. I have never had to experience that but then again I am only 12. This should have never happened. If you ever want to just talk, I'm here!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany

    Wow
    when i read this i felt like i was there.. the imagery was great and everything!! uggh i fu***** hate him too l0l
    great poem
    ilove it

    MUCH LOVE
    Brittany Jean Gilbert

    P.S.check mine out too... they won\'t be near as good as this though

  • 17 years ago

    by broken angel

    Gosh...this poem really hit me deep. It really hurts when someone you love and trust betrays you so thouroughly. It makes you sick doesn't it. I'm so sorry for the pain you must be going through, but this poem is absolutely awe-inspiring. I hope to see more masterpieces of this magnitude and keep your head up. If you ever need to talk, I would be more than willing to listen. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Dawn

    I am so sorry....... Your poem has made me cry, for that lil girl that was so scared and alone. I'm sorry that she had to go through that alone and not understanding any of it.......