Its a good poem. I really like it |
I like it it's one of the few rhyming poems that I actually like. |
by Birgit
Thanks for commenting my poem.. =) wow.. this one is very good! i've been in that position.. but I never gave up.. =) keep it up ^^ XxX |
by elektra
It was emotional and good,but i don't really get the point.for what reason do you want to suicide?are you neglected |
by Roxy
Holy f^ck, i love this lol its a poem that i would write ( but can't be bothered LOL) |
by Carly
Good i liked it alot. i hope that u dont actually wanna suicide cuz ive been tehre done. altho i didnt actually wanna die but u get it. good job! |
by cissy
That was great.I love it. |
I absolutely love this poem! it's everything i've tried to say on days when nothing seems right and everything you do ends in failure. i've been where you are, and right now my best friend and i are there so this really touched me. keep writin'. |
Hey......dont feel so down all of ta time....i always felt like that too but then relized that ppl do care even if they dont understand...im here to talk to if you want |
by Bunny
This one is good specially as per it's title, as there are many time's in our life the question arise 'WHY' |
by Todd Geatz
AWESOME I think its great and wish you the best! |