by Natasha "rayne" Sep 19, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
I sit here on the bus |
by kaida clover
Good piece needs a little work though umm i noticed 2 things "now we cant even (knowledge) each other" should be acknowledge "(why) happened to our "sisterhood" friendship?" should be what i think???... and im not sure the last 2 lines really flow that well but thats left to u of course... not trying to be a pain just thought ud want to know these lil mistakes.. |
The ending of this was sooooo cool it was another great poem perhaps could have been a bitl onger but still good xxx alex xxx |
by Jenni Marie
I liked it. |
This is so sad....i can realy relate |