We lost you

by Natasha "rayne"   Sep 19, 2006


My feelings for you feel from my heart like the tears from my face.
all my respect for you was lost, when you chose the drug over us.
you've said things that killed me on the inside
i know the drug created those words but still........you said it.
what happened to the mother i loved so much?
the one who knew where every sock and undie was?
the one who knew the solution to everything?
what happened to you?
before we were just losing you, there was some hope in saving you.
but now that hope is gone.
we lost you.
we lost you to the drug.

*this is a true story

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  • 18 years ago

    by Christie

    I really feel for u, though i understand i will never feel the extent of your pain.

    try to look up when things get tough, keep writing,
    5/5
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww. If you ever need to talk, I'm here. I've been througha a lot, and even losing a close family member. I hope you're not too broken up about it. =)

    Anyways, back to the poem. It was so sad. =( It made me think of a few of my friends, and how they use drugs. It's no excuse for them to say anything like they do, but they do. I thought your choice of words was great, and added a lot to the poem. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Am so sorry about your experience nut you have wrote amazingly about it your words come across so powerfull and gently i love your poems xxx alex xxx

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