Gripping cliches

by Watchmeburn   Sep 19, 2006


Gripping cliches,
Do I know her,
Mistakes in replays,
She multiplies.

A profane love so great,
Is insane,
She took the bait,
I knew she would.

A beaten grasp,
She crushed my hand,
And my escape went fast,
She tortured my hope.

It cant be stressed harder with words,
Than with violence now,
Letting the rat go is absurd,
Diseases must be cured.

On death row,
In my eyes,
Shes not allowed to go,
I hate her,her I despise.

I hate her,f**k my birth,
Noone even knows I live,
What the hell is of my worth,
F**k me from the inside.

Ill kill her,
Ill kill her,
My soul is dead,
There are no tears and I dont give a s**t.

Cliches in her fist,
Hit me again,
I am the only one on the list,
For her army of men.

I thought I asked to be saved,
Ill kill her,
Hopes crash down and concave,
I know, like she will, what its like to die.

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  • 18 years ago

    by aliiiii

    Hey, this is an AMAZING poem. Actually its one of the best I have EVER read. Unfortunatley.. I have deleted all of my poems and quotes.. I do not have copyright on them and I don't trust the world. But you however, should get it. because it would be tragic if somebody got ahold of it and used it in a harmful way. So just so you know, you are an awsome writer. I hope you take that far in life. 5/5.( It's worth MUCH more)

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley Bird

    Wow,. This poem is great. It's different, but in a good way, I really like it!

    Hayley

  • 18 years ago

    by eternalxxpromise

    Whoa...im like speechless. awesome poem, very strong.
    keep up the good work.
    -steph

  • 18 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem was great! relli good job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Gr8 poem. a very twisted poem. the emotions chang alot in the poem. the ending was a shock. keep writing:)