Gr8 poem. a very twisted poem. the emotions chang alot in the poem. the ending was a shock. keep writing:)

This poem was great! relli good job!!

Whoa...im like speechless. awesome poem, very strong.
keep up the good work.
-steph

Wow,. This poem is great. It's different, but in a good way, I really like it!

Hayley

Hey, this is an AMAZING poem. Actually its one of the best I have EVER read. Unfortunatley.. I have deleted all of my poems and quotes.. I do not have copyright on them and I don't trust the world. But you however, should get it. because it would be tragic if somebody got ahold of it and used it in a harmful way. So just so you know, you are an awsome writer. I hope you take that far in life. 5/5.( It's worth MUCH more)