This is a very good poem, your a good writter! Great job!

(Check out mine if u want coz i like to know wat peolpe think, thanx)

I love it!
this is a great poem
good job

Wow...this is awesome!!! i love it...i can very much relate to it...i have a few i used to write that were along those lines....but thats awesome that your name is hayley michelle too! just 2 letter difference...-lol- but keep writing cause you're really good and i hope to see more of yours later on...i dont get on here too much but ill be checking in...thanks for the comment! =DD

I liv this! check some of mine out....u'll like em if u like this kinda thing! ttyl...

Very good write. hayley.