Lucas

by sibyllene   Sep 19, 2006


You are too close
for me to freely breathe,
for me to dry my eyes,
for a goodbye.
You are too far
for my ruined heart to beat,
for my lonely blood to pulse,
for a smile to curve my lips.
I'll ask for nothing more
than to have your memory
remain forever
lodged,
like a blissful thorn,
in my coveting
heart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Connie

    Once again ~ a beautifully written poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I'll ask for nothing more
    than to have your memory
    remain forever
    lodged,
    like a blissful thorn,
    in my coveting
    heart.

    ^^ I love those lines. Very impacting. Flowed very well.. like Jenna saidm the pattern was very cool!
    I love your poetry, you have an amazing gift. Never stop writing!

    God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I liked this poem, the pattern was....different? But that was part of what drew me into it. It was a very emotion felt poem. Keep it up. 5/5 =]]

    -Jenna.

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Very nice,lovely poem,
    The flow is fluid as well
    Good Work!

    God Bless!

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