Well Ain't that the truth...so I'm guessing this is the poem you were telling me you wrote! Boy did I love it!!

Eirisa this is so amazingly good..I am at a lost for words..Normally I read your poems and have a huge esay comment, but seriously I'm like...speechless! Your choice of words were excellent!
I love that this was a non-rhyming poem! For some reason I just don't think I'd like it if it was a rhyming one...It seems like when you don't try to force rhymes, you write the TRUTH and you definatly were truthful about lies in this poem...alright, did that make sense to you? Yeah me either lol

What I'm trying to get at is this poem was Marvelous in so many ways! The way you described it to the way you were being honest, to the style you chose! Loved every bit of it!
Bubba Titta

WHOA! Eirisa this poem blew me away, as did it Chelsea. I havent read your work in quit some time but boy is this something amazing to come back to and read. awesome work.. even after all this time you STILL amaze me!! You have a true god given talent!! 5/5

- YOUR OLD FRIEND,
Maybeth !!

WHOA! Eirisa this poem blew me away, as did it Chelsea. I havent read your work in quit some time but boy is this something amazing to come back to and read. awesome work.. even after all this time you STILL amaze me!! You have a true god given talent!! 5/5

- YOUR OLD FRIEND,
Maybeth !!