Thoughts

by Hayley Bird   Sep 19, 2006


Thoughts come over me and crowd my mind
Filling it with my worries, fears and emotions
It's as if a black blanket of terror comes over me
I think about the war, and those people dying..
Dying because of jealousy and anger
I think about my friends and family..
How many of them can I trust?
I think about losing my friends and being alone
No one to lean on and no one to care about
But then again.....
I think about my future and dreams
Going to college to start life on my own
I think about my memories and life
Experiences that taught me so many things
I think about helping people
How much of a difference simple things can make
I think about my freedom and my youth
Yet...I realize the biggest journey is just now beginning

~Poem was written for school. It's one of my better pieces of un-rhymed poetry. Actually I think the best one, in My opinion, that is un-rhymed. But it's for you guys to judge. So just let me know what you think!!~

Hayley

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  • 18 years ago

    by catherine

    I love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Watchmeburn

    This is a good poem.
    Thanks for your comment on mine.

  • 18 years ago

    by Chloe [*]

    Thank you for the comment.. I thought i might hit you bak..
    Your poems are Beautiful.. This one is awsum.. this poem got to me.. :( was Beautiful..and really deep.. :) well done.. :)
    MwaH..XoxO..

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