by The Poetic Child Sep 20, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Emptiness begins to be filled with desire, |
by Robin Auger
I absolutely loved this poem. it flowed perfectly and i especially like the first stanza, it stood out the most! great poem. I have a book I am collecting at home of poems, I'm adding this one. Don't worry, its just for my own personal collection. I loved this one! 5/5 |
The last line *ive completeed my mission* thats so cookl be in a nother poem u said *its a guys mission* and i lvoe how allru sdtories tell ur life its amamzing. thats a true writer. awesome jobbb dave. |
by Mitsuki
REALLY REALLY NICE!!!! i love it 10/5 |
That was a really good love poem. it reminds me of my fiance, and what she means to me. thats all i can say. 5/5 |
Nice rythem you're gettn even better wow. |