The Luckiest Guy (part 2)

by Goran Rahim   Sep 20, 2006


Dear the luckiest guy in the world
It is me again, the hopeless guy.
Writing to you another note
But I really don't know exactly why

We both have something in common
The angel that we both love.
I am writing this to take out pain
Not to make your life anymore tough.

I was always dreaming and imagining
One day she will open her eyes
Then she'll realize how much I adore her
How One day I'll be a surprise

Having you in her life
All my dreams have faded
I am just a hopeless guy
My every day is jaded.

We were not alike
That is why she chose you
I was just being myself
I was being so true

You grew up in a land
Which was full of brightness
Me, since my childhood
Got use to this darkness

You can smile all the time
As you have much happiness
I got use to teardrops
Yet for her, it is meaningless.

I had the deepest feelings
Yet never she could see
Can you do me a favor?
Advise her not to hate me

You are the luckiest guy
Finding the reality of my dream
Yet I have no complaint
As it is destiny's chosen theme

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  • 9 years ago

    by Waina Honey

    Reminds me of my ex boyfriend.. This poem makes me want to get back with him.. OH NO!

  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    It was very clever and sweet. Somewhere in the middle I lost the flow of the poem, but the rest was very well written. I enjoyed the simplicity of your words; making it easy to follow what you’re trying to tell the readers. But I also liked the meaning behind each word that you wrote, nicely done. 5/5
    -mandy :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal

    That's such a sweet poem i feel sorry for the less fortunate guy he sounds sweet...

  • 16 years ago

    by Valerie

    Wow I love this. Amazing ... and it really gave me some thought there :). One of the best poem I've read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Emily E Mehigan

    Wow....I love part 2 also. Great job. <3