Again another very strong poem. I feel sorta attached to this poem because Im going through something similar. You have such an amazing sense of rhythm and rhyme nothing sounds outta place every word belongs

I liked this one as well.

~*Alex*~

NicE poeM.
VerY truE.
EnjoyeD readinG iT.
TakE carE...

LUZAn

Wow....I love part 2 also. Great job. <3

Wow I love this. Amazing ... and it really gave me some thought there :). One of the best poem I've read.

That's such a sweet poem i feel sorry for the less fortunate guy he sounds sweet...

It was very clever and sweet. Somewhere in the middle I lost the flow of the poem, but the rest was very well written. I enjoyed the simplicity of your words; making it easy to follow what you’re trying to tell the readers. But I also liked the meaning behind each word that you wrote, nicely done. 5/5
-mandy :)

Reminds me of my ex boyfriend.. This poem makes me want to get back with him.. OH NO!