by Truest Lies Sep 20, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The world is large, |
Love the poem great job...5/5.......your are a really good writter......oh and if you will can you please rate and comment on my poems thankz..... |
by TeAr dROp
Wow your poem was so good keep it up!!!! |
by Brian
Excellent bit of writing there! Nice work! |
by ashley
Hey this awesome!!5/5 |
by Void
Hey. I just came by to check out some of your work, and noticed a fewer new-er ones that I haven't read yet. This one, being among them. I really liked. Especially the shortness per line. Few poems can get away with that, and this was definatley one of those poems. I'm not sure what it is, but it's the way I read it to myself - the short abruptness of it was perfect for me. I also really enjoyed how throughout this write, you were saying how big the world is... And you ended with how small it can seem sometimes, almost insignificant compared to dreams one might have. Job well done :) |