This poem is so great, 5/5 from me. i really enjoyed reading it, full of meanings

I liked the way it flows 5/5

Great work loved the emotion! 5/5

Hey. I just came by to check out some of your work, and noticed a fewer new-er ones that I haven't read yet. This one, being among them. I really liked. Especially the shortness per line. Few poems can get away with that, and this was definatley one of those poems. I'm not sure what it is, but it's the way I read it to myself - the short abruptness of it was perfect for me. I also really enjoyed how throughout this write, you were saying how big the world is... And you ended with how small it can seem sometimes, almost insignificant compared to dreams one might have. Job well done :)

Hey this awesome!!5/5

Excellent bit of writing there! Nice work!

Wow your poem was so good keep it up!!!!

Love the poem great job...5/5.......your are a really good writter......oh and if you will can you please rate and comment on my poems thankz.....