Rain Like Tears [Senryu]

by Tammie   Sep 20, 2006


The rain makes her sad
Drops fall like tears on her cheek
Slowly rolling down.

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Senryu is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed
lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5). Senryu is usually written in the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was excellent, it was so short, yet it tells of a great sadness behind the words. Awesome job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another very nice poem by you, I could see alot of emotions.....great job
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I had to comment this one for you.. it seemed so lonely, tehe.

    This was a great Senryu, aswel. I loved it how you compared the emotions to rain in the first line. Very nicely done! Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

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