Letty
What can I say
Maybe I shouldn't say anything
Whenever I send a card of love I pick it carefully and add a footnote
"The Words say It All"
And in this poem that applies
Its straight from the heart
5/5
Love
John

Ok I dont know where to start from, the truth is it is been a while since I have the same feelings, about present and how I see my future. I think it was so great as it touched me alot, another great job by a great poet. I really love thise poem, 5/5

Thank you so much for commenting on my poems I really appreciate it and i enjoyed reading your interpretation. You are an awesome poetess and i really enjoy reading your poems you are on my favorite list.

"I think my time is nearing it's end"

^ That line read a little awkward for me. Maybe if you took off 'it's end' it would flow much easier :)

I do love the message in this poem, however. I thought it was very well written. i think we all feel hopeless sometimes, yet God is always there to help us.

That you so much for all the encouraging comments you have left on my poems! It feels great that someone is always behind me to watch me grow in what I love doing best! I hope everything's ok, and that you get better soon :)

Love
Sarah-Joy

Very beautiful poem. This is so incredibly true when there is total silence and you are aware and can hear/sense the air going past your hear. When its that quite and your by yourself I find it impossible not to wonder about life and how you fit in this great puzzle. You think about your past and the direction your going, and how different it is then you imagined 10 years ago through all this thinking the only answer is god and the sensation of knowing everything is in His hands.

Very Beautiful Poem

Arsalan D.

Ok nice poem very cool aobut finding God an such.

*4th line- needs a break/comma before and please lose the 'now'

*6th line- the wording is confusing, so please rearrange it or add a break/comma. its hard to understands because of the backword desciptions.

**AHH~!~ SAD! DONT EVER USE SAD!!!!
or mad, bad, glad, good etc. no 3 letter words!! especially ones that end with AD!!
~~ i understand you did this to rhyme but it sounds forced and childish, and actually dumb. the first stanza doesn't even seem to rhyme that mcuh so it isnt needed to rhyme anyways. soi reccomend you replace SAD with a better more adult word.-depressed maybe?

*4th stanza 2nd line- too Wahh, boo hoo it all sucks.. .. i dont know what to do. boo hoo.. lol. maybe- need guidance for my future? see how it sounds more adult and less like whining?

but a great poem very deep and emotive. =]]

x.x:Lauren ~5|5

Im going to do the last 4 tomorrow, b/c i have to get off. and do homework. =]